Chapters 4 & 5
I forgot to tell you they both are in Chapter 5
It sounds and reads great. 2 things though. 1 The sentence beginning with: ( The only card ) go down to ( he Wagner,) I think there should be a comma before (he).
Sentence 2: The left skiff: 3rd line (he would needed ) needs to be changed to (need).
I forgot to tell you they both are in Chapter 5
It sounds and reads great. 2 things though. 1 The sentence beginning with: ( The only card ) go down to ( he Wagner,) I think there should be a comma before (he).
Sentence 2: The left skiff: 3rd line (he would needed ) needs to be changed to (need).